Wednesday, 20 November 2013

Description of a photo.

Cars packed trying to get out of the area. Trying but for most, failing. This is a common day for all man kind in this generation. This is all because of the infection. At least half the worlds population is now gone, taken those creatures. Skies now as black as coal burnt to a crisp and most the clouds are caused by smoke from destroyed factories. The smell of toxic fumes fills the air and the taste of nuclear power in everyones mouth from the fallen stations. Screams fill the ears of millions of innocent people. Honking cars mute out all other sounds. The air is thick and feels musky. Destroyed buildings and shelters lying on the ground, now useless rubble. 

1 comment:

  1. I thought that it was well written, I liked how you said that everything turned into useless rubble. There was one simile and maybe you could have added one more somewhere. Your SPG was all up to scratch and that didn't need any changing. Your description was amazing, and you did do enough writing for today.

    Conor :v

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